Wednesday, 21 February 2018
100 word challenge week 4
“We have visual on the target sir. We starting to get closer to the target.” It was a quiet morning in the town of Deadwood, South Dakota, USA. The town of 1,270 had no idea what was coming. The FBI was dressed as trees, slowly chasing after someone. The man had a briefcase with classified information in it. The stickmen were slowly getting closer and closer. Until they were close enough to grab the man. One of the men grabbed the man. Then fell to the ground. The man with the briefcase didn’t do anything to make him fall. This was the start of an apocalypse.
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I like the way you have set your scene - you have orientated your reader to the time and where you story takes place. Continue to think about where you should use full stops. I look forward to reading your next post.
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