“Down the stairs to the left.” Stated the security guard. We were going to a underground singing competition. We got down there and saw a spinning wheel. The wheel was used to decide what we were singing about. The wheel spun. The chosen topic was The boxer from Bath who is orange. Clumsily I put my hand for my band to sing about. We started off good with our song titled The Orange Fighter From Bath. They danced and I singed and we thought it would become a billboard hit. I opened my eyes and everyone was gone. I think they didn’t like our song.
James, you come up with amazing ideas for writing! I really enjoy reading your work. Continue to think about where to use commas, especially when writing dialogue. How could you improve the fluidity of your writing in this text? I look forward to being impressed by your next 100 Word Challenge.
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